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Hi! Post here if you have any comments, concerns, crit or praise for how I play Tommy Shepherd.

I'd love any and all feedback, just try to keep it constructive! "You suck" doesn't help me improve. But "when you did X I thought it was OOC, but when you said Y that was totally spot on" does help.

Thank you!

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( You know those dreams where you realize you're naked... )

[Reaction posts and offline threads with Dash the next day are welcome! If you want to approach him later about his dream, feel free.]

Dear Fishbowl,

Apparently it's war now. Well trust me, I intend to bring it.

Love and Kisses,

Your Evil Overlord

P.S. Cross is a fatty.

P.P.S. Hi guys. What's up?

P.P.P.S. So apparently I accidentally all our stuff, house, savings, you know. Anyone interested in the Evil Overlord Charity Fund? It involves you, me and a cup of coffee, to start with.

I've been here over two years now. It's a weird thing to notice.

Maybe I'm just getting used to this place. Scary thought. Maybe I'm just going crazy. I'm mad, you're mad, we're all mad style of thing. You don't have to be crazy to work here, but it helps.

Anyway, it's not here yet but winter's coming up. I don't know if anyone remembers Kitty, but she used to make cake for newborns. Which was pretty cool. And speaking of cool, the Hall of Beginning gets kinda arctic in the winter months. Which means we need warm clothes for newborns. And I was thinking if we could get volunteers to make hot drinks or something every day for the hall, and a heater to keep them warm, that'd be kinda nice for the poor new suckers who get stuck in this place.

That, and the greeters sure aren't gonna complain, believe me.

So, if anyone could donate a portable stove or something, and maybe a rotating volunteer cycle? Any warm drinks are going to go miles when the cold hits--coffee, tea, cider, hot cocoa, whatever.

Okay, poll. Is transmogrified a real word? And what does it mean?

Also, anyone ever heard of a creepy guy named Pandemonium? How about a Memphis Mefeestofeelis M&M Mephistopheles?

And finally who here knows much about Hell? I mean the old, sulfur and brimstone, damned souls, lake of fire place.

Bonus: I look awesome. Cape, helmet, totally badass. Why does it give me such a weird vibe?

((OOC: Strikes are readable. Tommy is dressed like his grandpa AKA Magneto.))

Cross's journal isn't working anymore.

And my name is Thomas Tommy.

Twin, I'm gonna come over and crash.

Hey, anyone seen Code?

And how long have I been gone? Not to be cliche or anything, but what day is it? Month? Year?

He'll find a pizza box sitting innocently on his bed. WHAT LUCK! But instead of pizza it's a Touch/Sound crystal of lame. You see this picture? Dash will be wearing the lambie outfit when he wakes up. For FOUR DAYS.

Reference: Young Avengers Issue 10, Pages 20, 21, 22, 23 and 24.

( Dash vs. Super-Skrull round one. Fight! Spoilers: The Super-Skrull wins. )

[The post is in Cross and Dash's handwriting, with a lot of squiggled lines, ink dots and scribbles. The handwriting is messy on both their parts.]

Hey guys [Squiggly line]

[Little circle.] We lost our other pen. Please bear with us for a moment.

Dude, seriously trying to make a point I know but as I was saying has anyone seen Bastet? She wasn't

Hey I was writing that! She didn't show for shift today, so if anyone has seen her could you

And you'll ramble around before getting to the point! tell us. We really Ramble? I'll ramble your head! We're seriously worried because she never ditches. So if

If we 'rumble', you'll lose. you see her, please check on Like you stand a chance. her. And maybe like drop us a note or something? And some pens, because this guy

Who pinned who in the remote war? That's right, not you. We'd appreciate it! Oh like you're any

[Squiggly liiiines!] Sincerely and all that, E.O. and Cross (seriously though, we're worried) gotta be fa

Thanks again! Get ready to los

((OOC: Change in hand-writing is being represented by colors for ease of reading Dash and Cross. Edit: As of this parts of the main post are very lightly struck through.))